【10-05】a letter to leejunghyun(2)

parkjunghoon

  Dear Hyun:
       I am one of the most loyal fans of you,My name is Parkjunghoon,i am 15 years old.I am a boy.At present,i am a senior high school student,i love your songs,dances,andyourTV plays, and yourself.I think  my Hyun is the most beautiful girl in Keroa.My english is pretty good.I hope Hyun can talk with me in english and i want to study Hangul in the future,but i just begin to learn it,could you to help me?I hope you can write a letter to me,may i get your outograph and your newCD,thanks.My add is.........I hope your new album have a big sell!
       Best wish for you,see you next time,bye!
                                                                                                                your sincerely
                                                                                                          parkjunghoon
                                                                                                                  2006.9.30

q86554825

Are  you  a  Chinese?Your  English  is very  good!But  do  you  think your  letter  can be seen by   leejunghyun?I  don't  think so  .  Why  don't  you  go to  Keroa  to  study ?If  you  are  there  ,you  may  see  leejunghyun.

___殿丅ヽ

这么拽，还用英文写，有创意，顶了，支持你了，嘿嘿~~望继续努力！！！ [s:29]

Final Fantasy

有是一个比我小的贤迷~~

zzjzzjzzj

i found a mistake,"Keroa"??? "korea"is right!!! [s:36]  [s:36]  [s:36]

zzjzzjzzj

could you to help me,时态错误和介词错误，ＣＡＮ后面是ＤＯ，所以应该是ＣＡＮ　ＹＯＵ　ＨＥＬＰ　ＭＥ～～～ [s:29]  [s:29]  [s:29]

⒐⒋

比我也小...............

七夜甄铃

晕``狂拽英语``欺负偶英语差`不过还是能看懂的``

q86554825

我觉得他英语可以了。虽然有些错误，我觉得也没什么，能让人看懂就行了。

阿里郎

楼主是韩国人？~~~朴正。。。勋？

matchmake

哇，飙英语啊，偶闪了，GO~GO~GO~

leeyoo

呵呵,真实有心啊