parkjunghoon 发表于 2006-10-5 10:54:01

【10-05】a letter to leejunghyun(2)

Dear Hyun:
     I am one of the most loyal fans of you,My name is Parkjunghoon,i am 15 years old.I am a boy.At present,i am a senior high school student,i love your songs,dances,andyourTV plays, and yourself.I thinkmy Hyun is the most beautiful girl in Keroa.My english is pretty good.I hope Hyun can talk with me in english and i want to study Hangul in the future,but i just begin to learn it,could you to help me?I hope you can write a letter to me,may i get your outograph and your newCD,thanks.My add is.........I hope your new album have a big sell!
     Best wish for you,see you next time,bye!
                                        your sincerely
                                      parkjunghoon
                                      2006.9.30

q86554825 发表于 2006-10-5 11:11:04

AreyouaChinese?YourEnglishis verygood!Butdoyouthink yourlettercan be seen by   leejunghyun?Idon'tthink so.Whydon'tyougo toKeroatostudy ?Ifyouarethere,youmayseeleejunghyun.
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___殿丅ヽ 发表于 2006-10-5 11:11:49

这么拽，还用英文写，有创意，顶了，支持你了，嘿嘿~~望继续努力！！！

Final Fantasy 发表于 2006-10-5 11:16:48

有是一个比我小的贤迷~~

zzjzzjzzj 发表于 2006-10-5 11:42:58

i found a mistake,"Keroa"??? "korea"is right!!!

zzjzzjzzj 发表于 2006-10-5 11:46:19

could you to help me,时态错误和介词错误，ＣＡＮ后面是ＤＯ，所以应该是ＣＡＮ　ＹＯＵ　ＨＥＬＰ　ＭＥ～～～

⒐⒋ 发表于 2006-10-5 11:50:40

比我也小...............

七夜甄铃 发表于 2006-10-5 11:53:52

晕``狂拽英语``欺负偶英语差`不过还是能看懂的``

q86554825 发表于 2006-10-5 11:56:43

我觉得他英语可以了。虽然有些错误，我觉得也没什么，能让人看懂就行了。
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阿里郎 发表于 2006-10-5 12:28:39

楼主是韩国人？~~~朴正。。。勋？

matchmake 发表于 2006-10-5 12:36:47

哇，飙英语啊，偶闪了，GO~GO~GO~

leeyoo 发表于 2006-10-5 13:38:12

呵呵,真实有心啊
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