Every day I now in the study, the study which goes all out!
Teachers thought that I am a good student, very much favors me
If after I graduate, continues to pursue advanced studies again for 3 years.
I possibly had more choices, for instance study abroad
But individual feeling goes abroad now, also will not have the big transformation to the future 。
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原帖由 zkydw 于 2007/12/28 15:31 发表
时态和介词的用法有一定的错误.固定搭配也是.
Every day I am in the study which all go out!
Teachers think that I am a good student, and they like me very much .
After graduate, if I pursu ...
我觉得这一句改成这样比较好:"and they enjoy me very much" 还有这一句:After graduation,.......